Info:
Canon EOS 40D
EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM
(3) 580EX II flashes
Cybersync triggers
DPP and CS2

45" Gold umbrella camera left
33" White umbrella camera right
Bare flash far camera right

C&C please

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hrm, i'm not qualified to be offering any worthwhile critiques. but i'm just wondering why so much light on the right? her face looks a tad overexposed on that side in the 2nd shot.

 

i like the second shot

 

the bare flash adds an odd lighting in the last two shots that distracts. adds some weird and uncontrolled shadows to her face. also seems you cut a bit too much off her head in the last two shots.

 

cutie!!

 

she's cute, but she's kind of a b!tch haha

 

I would photoshop the face to make the skin tone for soft and blur effects...

 

Actually I like the lighting in these. What she doesn't know how to smile though?

 

she has a long neck

 

She doesn't look good when she smiles

 

have you ever used gels on your flashes? using some neutral toned ones might help

 

was thinking the same thing

 

^+100000

 

hell yeah this girl's a b!tch, i had class with her a couple of times hahaha