Originally Posted by MagicPie

I had trouble with the HD, and had to resort to the youtube.
I am not trying to be critical so dont take anything the wrong way

As for the choppy pans, am sure the codec, small size of the youtube video have some negative effects. However on a fast moving subject, you should start your pan before the subject enters frame, in your case the subject came in and then the camera panned. If you want to convey smoothness and motion, the pan and the car, most move in the same relative speed.

The zoom, makes more sense now I know used after effects, I still think its a bit too much and using my idea in the other post would of more effective.

I know how it is, one you a limited amount of people, and your trying to do everything. There are limitations but like I said early the overall movie was rather good.

I do film advisory for several movie studios, kinda of what am doing with you, but on much more detail, larger and less friendly scale.
I dont own the rights to anything I do, so I have nothing to show you. Its been years since I've done anything solo.

What camera are you using? am a big Panasonic fan, and actually partially sponsored by them.