Recently made this video with some friends, need input on it. The video was just made for fun but making it better is always a goal so let me know what you think. Thanks!

 

I saw elton john earlier today and this is still the gayest thing I've seen all day.

Cool pool though.

 

No guys in swimsuits & include cars preferably Z's racing & drifting.

 

Needs moar girlz

 

ban him please!

 

I couldn't watch more than 10 seconds of scrawny dudes playing in a pool before my awkward hard on forced me to stop.

I bet it could use more Lucas wipes, though.

 

and this is who now owns a Z..... I'm not even a professional videographer and i can see why they dislike the ease that amateurs can make videos with now

 

Please send me a check for the minute I spent watching this.

 

That made me hot.

 

Ok I made it to :50, so at least I can give you my opinion. I work in TV so at least my opinion is valid.

Don't start your video with natural sound of the camera moving into position, sounds and looks very amateurish. Keep the guy yelling underwater. Jump right into the music with a quick montage of some cool jumps, then stop the music for a quick sound up where somebody says something cool or funny.

That's all you get. If you want more then $$$

 

do this - not the shot, just the length of time - then become the next dude perfect. You are on your way

 

 

good advice, yea i would just mute the sound in the beginning and add in some rapid edits of jumps as a teaser for the vid to hook people in.

 

 

Needs Zs, or cars that are almost as awesome as the Z (will be hard to find) annnnnd oh, and GIRLS!!!