These came out really nice

Info:
Canon 40D
EF-S 17-55 f/2.8 IS USM
EF 70-200 f/2.8L IS USM
Three 580 EX II flashes
Cybersync Triggers
Shot RAW convert to JPEG in DPP and minor touch ups made in CS2

C&C PLEASE!

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5

 

photo's look great, now where are the NSFW ones

 

i wasnt gunna push it for the first shoot with her

 

 

I am not a photographer, but I think that if you could clear up the background in the last 2 pics, they would look better(I don't know if this is possible or not). 1st pic(sunset) is by far my favorite.

Keep up the good work Josh

 

I was trying to get as much depth of feilds as i could, but it was so tough shooting midday and trying to get her exposed with the background properly, i was as fast as i could go on the shutter. thanks for the advice though, sometimes it takes someone who isnt a photographer to notice little details that catch their eye

 

First shot looks great to me, the others look like there is too much flash, she looks artificially bright. I know you are trying to highlight her, but it just looks strange to me. Very nice shots though, and she's cute

 

Lighting for the first 2 seems a little harsh, for the mood of the photos. She looked like she was blasted with a spotlight.

I'm not a fan of the location of the last 2 photos

First 2 pics are the best!

 

1. In for n00dz
2. First picture looks great
Tres. That's three in spanish
4. Agree with the others... last few look like too much flash.

 

You stripped your EXIF data so I dont know what your setting was but was any of these shot at 200 f2.8 at all? If not, why not? That 70-200f2.8IS is amazing, you should have been able to easily separate your background from you subject.

My favorite are #1, love the choice to keep the background and #5, but wish you could have separated the background from the model more.

2,3,4 ....lighting is too harsh for me.

 

less clothing and then it will be perfect

 

the last two shots EXIF are both

1/250
f/7.1
ISO 100
70mm focal length

i couldnt open up anymore without blowing it out, i darkened it quite a bit i pp. i think the only way i could get a better DOF is if i would have stepped back and used all 200mm of zoom

 

 

I think that would have looked pretty good, what triggers are you using? will they reach? I haven't tested the range on my CyberSync's yet.

 

Watch the models arms in 1, 2, and 3. You want a little bend in them. The camera really exaggerates hyper-extension. It's not too bad in 4 & 5 because of the pose.

Move the light away from the model. If you double the distance between the light and the model, you'll lose 1-stop or half of the light.

 

She is very pretty. Pics came out awsome!

 

pretty face , really nice legs ... no *****

i only care about the content... LMAO !!!!

 

#3 is winner imo, some hard shadows in there tho

 

i love #1, but i also have to agree w/ the other poster in they all look a little blown out.

 

No n00dz yet? Imminent thread fialure.