Please Critique Website I'm Creating
11-21-2003, 08:39 AM
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Please Critique Website I'm Creating
http://intertechoverload.com/ITOL/index.htm
Hey all, Can you critique me on this website I'm building it for my company. It's not fully finished yet, but would like to make sure it looks good before I put it up on Sunday.
phil
Hey all, Can you critique me on this website I'm building it for my company. It's not fully finished yet, but would like to make sure it looks good before I put it up on Sunday.
phil
11-21-2003, 09:12 AM
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Nice layout. Very clean and uncluttered page. Maybe a bit too sparse. Perhaps more formatting would help -- maybe an outside border.
Some constructive criticism...
1. that aircraft pic in the upper left looks odd (it looked like a football with lines coming out of it... took me a minute to figure it out -- maybe I'm just dumb tho)
2. too much empty grey box at the top. Maybe you should incorporate your logo and company name into this box.
3. line up your edges. If you look at the grey box and the pic beneath it, their left edges do not line up.
4. the "company info, careers, etc.." links in the grey box - maybe have them as clickable images instead of linked text
That's about it for now. Sorry if I sound like a dick, I don't mean to. Web page coding is just what I spend most of my time doing at work.
Some constructive criticism...
1. that aircraft pic in the upper left looks odd (it looked like a football with lines coming out of it... took me a minute to figure it out -- maybe I'm just dumb tho)
2. too much empty grey box at the top. Maybe you should incorporate your logo and company name into this box.
3. line up your edges. If you look at the grey box and the pic beneath it, their left edges do not line up.
4. the "company info, careers, etc.." links in the grey box - maybe have them as clickable images instead of linked text
That's about it for now. Sorry if I sound like a dick, I don't mean to. Web page coding is just what I spend most of my time doing at work.
11-21-2003, 09:30 AM
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Originally posted by 2004z
Nice layout. Very clean and uncluttered page. Maybe a bit too sparse. Perhaps more formatting would help -- maybe an outside border.
Some constructive criticism...
1. that aircraft pic in the upper left looks odd (it looked like a football with lines coming out of it... took me a minute to figure it out -- maybe I'm just dumb tho)
2. too much empty grey box at the top. Maybe you should incorporate your logo and company name into this box.
3. line up your edges. If you look at the grey box and the pic beneath it, their left edges do not line up.
4. the "company info, careers, etc.." links in the grey box - maybe have them as clickable images instead of linked text
That's about it for now. Sorry if I sound like a dick, I don't mean to. Web page coding is just what I spend most of my time doing at work.
Nice layout. Very clean and uncluttered page. Maybe a bit too sparse. Perhaps more formatting would help -- maybe an outside border.
Some constructive criticism...
1. that aircraft pic in the upper left looks odd (it looked like a football with lines coming out of it... took me a minute to figure it out -- maybe I'm just dumb tho)
2. too much empty grey box at the top. Maybe you should incorporate your logo and company name into this box.
3. line up your edges. If you look at the grey box and the pic beneath it, their left edges do not line up.
4. the "company info, careers, etc.." links in the grey box - maybe have them as clickable images instead of linked text
That's about it for now. Sorry if I sound like a dick, I don't mean to. Web page coding is just what I spend most of my time doing at work.
11-21-2003, 11:01 AM
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If you ned help w/ the coding, let me know.
Maybe you could do a small flash thing with that "sky" pic you have as the centerpiece. Also, that pic of the dude on his cell phone looks kinda out of place. It's throwing the color scheme off.
Maybe you could do a small flash thing with that "sky" pic you have as the centerpiece. Also, that pic of the dude on his cell phone looks kinda out of place. It's throwing the color scheme off.
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