http://intertechoverload.com/ITOL/index.htm

Hey all, Can you critique me on this website I'm building it for my company. It's not fully finished yet, but would like to make sure it looks good before I put it up on Sunday.

phil

 

Nice layout. Very clean and uncluttered page. Maybe a bit too sparse. Perhaps more formatting would help -- maybe an outside border.

Some constructive criticism...

1. that aircraft pic in the upper left looks odd (it looked like a football with lines coming out of it... took me a minute to figure it out -- maybe I'm just dumb tho)

2. too much empty grey box at the top. Maybe you should incorporate your logo and company name into this box.

3. line up your edges. If you look at the grey box and the pic beneath it, their left edges do not line up.

4. the "company info, careers, etc.." links in the grey box - maybe have them as clickable images instead of linked text

That's about it for now. Sorry if I sound like a dick, I don't mean to. Web page coding is just what I spend most of my time doing at work.

 

Thanks! I will definitely make some changes. The football shape thing is the company logo. Nothing I can do w/ that one.

 

Yeah, what he said... other than that... LOOKS GOOD

 

Good start so far. Some minor aesthetical issues that have been mentioned previously I contend with... looking forward to the finalized product.

 

Thank you. Thank you. Definitely appreciated

 

If you ned help w/ the coding, let me know.

Maybe you could do a small flash thing with that "sky" pic you have as the centerpiece. Also, that pic of the dude on his cell phone looks kinda out of place. It's throwing the color scheme off.

 

Yeah 2004z... that was what I was thinking, a SWF object. Or at least a movable GIF... adds a little pizzaz and life to the site.

 

Who is hosting it for you?

Rcih Spohr
VP Sales
EZwebcreator.biz

 

Thanks! I'll move the guy out. I'll see what I can do with some swf and the clouds. I took that picture on my way back from Florida.