http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu...deoid=47231694

tell me whatcha think

 

imho, a very poorly laid out video. with the wind noise, and lack of angles, it makes it hard to watch for 4+ minutes. try getting a microphone to put in your engine bay, get more extremem angles, and have a few people film as well. its hard to do it as a 1 man job, but you have the potential to make a great video

 

Thanks for the honesty

 

what about the rest of ya'z, whatcha' think?

 

Too many straights. Throw some twisties in the mix. I would try to capture the exhaust note. If wind noise is a problem, cover up the mic with some foam or something. Have a friend put the cam on the back of their car with you chasing them. Have someone standing on the side of the road capturing some flybys.

 

thanks for that idea, and as the foam goes , i tried it and it didnt make a difference, im thinkin about getting a MIC and putting it in the engine bay then getting another mic and putting it on the outside near the license plate to capture the rear exhaust note since the wind noise is too much of a problem ya know also,
im thinkin about getting one more goprocam since they are only 200. and then ill use my regular digital camera and make a mount for the interior. it will be sick, then ill have a couple different people standing outside for out of car shots then ill get some of my friends in their cars and tape me driving down the street / highway, etc. to get more angles for a better video. but i like how you gave me the idea TO strap one on a car ahead of me or behind me for more perspective shots.

 

+1

 

I thought it was a pretty good video. I didnt sit through the whole 4+ min, but i still enjoyed it. I would really like to see another video if you make one

 

I made two more versions of the drive, check em out, tell me whatcha think.

Pt 1: http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...deoid=47338642

Pt 2: http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...deoid=47338777

 

3rd version

http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...deoid=47379841

 

i will get some more footage and work on a better video,all these vids ive ever put out, just practice. you guys know what imean, the more you do them the better you get at them. im not worried about my driving, its my camera skills and directing skills i want feedback on, haha.

 

What kinda camera mount are you using?

When editing, keep your angles running no longer that 15 seconds. Keeps the viewers interested, otherwise, boredom may set in.

 

goprocamera, and thanks for the tip, ill make my scenes 15 sec long and get more creative with the angles, having more people on board to use a chase car and a car i can follow or do fly bys with and people standing outside to get shots of me driving by. im new to the movie making thing but its fun and i cant complain about constructive critazzanz to make me better