C&C please..
05-25-2008, 10:34 PM
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C&C please..
one night my friend and i just decided to drive to downtown, LA to snap a few shots of his car and just random buildings. then another night we cruised along the PCH for some beach shots. stayed out all night. lol. comments and criticisms please.
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a few new pictures!
LOLz.. so heres the story to this batch of pictures..
my friend and i were just driving on wilshire passing by miracle mile and ran into this place next to some museum. i really wanted to take shots there and it got boring because i didnt have a car or a model to shoot. so my friend volunteered to be the model.... seems like he was a little too... enthusiastic? passionate? anyways... here you go.
#4 for you naruto fans... honestly i didnt know what the hell he was doing.
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a few new pictures!
LOLz.. so heres the story to this batch of pictures..
my friend and i were just driving on wilshire passing by miracle mile and ran into this place next to some museum. i really wanted to take shots there and it got boring because i didnt have a car or a model to shoot. so my friend volunteered to be the model.... seems like he was a little too... enthusiastic? passionate? anyways... here you go.
#4 for you naruto fans... honestly i didnt know what the hell he was doing.
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05-25-2008, 10:55 PM
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Originally Posted by ni$mo350
WOW Great pics! They turned out perfect
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. great shots btw
05-26-2008, 06:21 PM
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Originally Posted by noodleman
for 10 and 11, did you stand in the middle of the street for those shots?
Lets see more!
05-26-2008, 06:27 PM
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Enjoying this! Wow. Crazy shot.
BTW, YOU NEED AN ULTRA WIDE ANGLE! Have you tried one? If not, wait till you see what you're missing at 10mm/11mm/12mm...
The ultra wide would give those skyscraper shots more dramatic as it allows you to get closer to the buildings.... and get more of them in there.... you would have gotten the third building (barely showing on the left) in from this shot:
Great composition in the following due to the diagonal lines!
05-26-2008, 06:43 PM
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Originally Posted by erickim080387
thank you. deffinitely not "perfect" lol. there are many photographers on this forum that can teach me a lot. btw, all shots were taken with a D40 with kit lens.
05-27-2008, 07:26 AM
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Originally Posted by noodleman
for 10 and 11, did you stand in the middle of the street for those shots?
it was at 3-4AM so it wasnt very scary.
Originally Posted by ctwentytwo
Yeah, that's some crazy stuff. I love the last pic. HUGE improvement my friend. Love the architecture/sculpture/skyscraper shots. Lets see more!
Lets see more!
Originally Posted by ctwentytwo
Enjoying this! Wow. Crazy shot.
BTW, YOU NEED AN ULTRA WIDE ANGLE! Have you tried one? If not, wait till you see what you're missing at 10mm/11mm/12mm...
The ultra wide would give those skyscraper shots more dramatic as it allows you to get closer to the buildings.... and get more of them in there.... you would have gotten the third building (barely showing on the left) in from this shot:
Great composition in the following due to the diagonal lines!
05-27-2008, 07:28 AM
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Originally Posted by Fastway
I love your pictures! It makes me feel good too since I just bought a D40!
Originally Posted by J_Dizzle
17 is an amazing shot. they all look really good too
anything i need to improve on guys?
